The Art of Bonsai Project

This is my Pistacia lentiscusin In training since 2007 as nursery stock.


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(Pistacia lentiscus)
Age of bonsai: 8
Height: 25 cm
In training since 2007
Nursery stock.
Pot: Bonsaisan

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First aspect 2007

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2008 february
prune and wireing

I'm sorry, this display does not work for me.

The branch placement, ramification, trunk to height ratio, bark texture, foliage, and nebari all tell of a young tree, yet the trunk movement and windswept branching suggest an older tree..

There is no detail work at all, even the wiring in place currently achieves course styling only.

The pot, although nice, is too large for this tree.

The ground cover is too over powering.

The mountain stone should be placed further back and higher to suggest a distant mountain.

The bonsai pot the stone is placed in is distracting and inappropriate for displaying a stone.

I do like the photography in the first photograph.


Will

Pistacia lentiscus create a style that is fully on this subject than the nature are shaping

Moyogi had a style that's closer to the form
I use this structure began to change the visual shape
We would always help me in this matter
I'm doing this post I am listening to you and tailored to
I would like now to get your comments about the new style in 2010, which
I know the color of the flower pot next year wrong, but I'll make him a suitable pot


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